Okay im Ready. To Describe iT. Please read. Everyones invited.

Come Closer to ME.

just clip ON.

iWant you right next to me.

and never gET oFF.

be part of ME

and LETs take THiS head ON.

iN my MiND

iNever want YoU

to gET oFF.

iLeave

because iHave to

nEveEr bEcausE

iHave tO.

 

2011
03/23
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  1. Like the way you’re playing with the structure of the poem.

  2. fun flow..

    enjoyed your creativity.
    🙂
    Happy Rally.

  3. Wow, the hidden beats behind your words, bring the tune and flow of words.. Being part of you.. great expression..

    http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/collections-of-tings-poetry-tp20-that.html

    That is mine for the rally.. 🙂

    See you

  4. Interesting poem construction. :]

  5. a treat for the eyes. 😉

    • thingy
    • March 23rd, 2011

    Ooh, nice!

  7. Looks like you had fun with the letters here. I like the line “just clip ON”–that’ll get you closer.

  8. nice one! I enjoyed reading 🙂

  9. It is great! I love when poets play with their poems. It makes it fun and interesting! Love it!

  10. Very Interesting indeed !
    Happy Rally
    JL&B

  11. a nice play with the words.. very interesting!

    Here’s My Poem For Poets Rally

  12. how is your day?

    please find time visiting poets who were here for you but you did not visit yet..

    Thanks..

    have fun. 🙂

  13. loved its unique structure.

  14. one small word that will grow on you.. beautiful! here’s mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/wedged/

  15. That was cool, different. Thank you for sharing it.

  16. This is cool. I love your word play.

    • irisdeurmyer
    • March 31st, 2011

    Kudos
    concrete poems interest me with their structure is so important to the poem. This is a form I am not good at, but you seem to have captured it very well.

  18. i like to play w/
    structure
    form
    &
    punctuation
    plus
    occasionally
    i’ll create
    a word

    interesting piece

    peace & love
    my brother

    estewolf

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